Haiku 1# Moon


This post is Inspired by  Carpe Diem Haiku Kai’s “Vision Quest” Day #1 New Moon. 

New moon

Brunette bride

Glancing from her starry eyes

wz

I was motivated to try my hands on Haiku from months, today I got to read few lovely & inspiring posts on the Haiku while browsing through the Poetry/Haiku. I also got inspired to try it. It will take time to imbibe & reflect Haiku true spirits. I would really appreciate your critique to improvise. Cheers 🙂 🙂

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29 thoughts on “Haiku 1# Moon

  1. Ruchi … this is a first step to become addicted to haiku I think. This first try is not bad, not bad at all. It gives me a feeling of warm love and romance. Welcome by the way at Carpe Diem Haiku Kai a family of haiku-poets and our family is growing, not fast, but it grows. By the way … I am your host at Carpe Diem Haiku Kai.

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