This week Prompt- DARKNESS
“This isn’t good, you have to pull your life together, decide, for yourself, no one else is going to do that for you”, voice commanded her.
She nodded lying in battered & beaten state; the domestic abuse was a ritual for her life, culminating it into this indefensible reality, as she lay fragile in that hospital bed, pulling herself out of darkness of her fears, submissiveness and lost self-esteem. She contemplated and promised herself once more to fight back these demons of darkness, ignorance and self-pity.
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Nice work! I enjoyed your writing style.
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Thanks Elan for your Kind words. Good Wishes 🙂 Will sure check the link you shared.
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Nicely written, especially the opening lines. We are the one’s who should pull everything together and not expect others to do it.
Have a great day.
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Thanks ANooP 🙂 I am glad the words resonated well with you. Cheers & Tc 🙂
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Nice piece Ruchi….the line “promised herself once more to fight back”…..says a lot.
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Thanks Vidya for your wonderful insights as always 🙂 Tc xoxo
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Enjoyed it..you write these things ( 5 sentence fiction) very well… 🙂
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Thanks Maniparna for your lovely words, you made me smile 🙂
Good Wishes. xoxo
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Someone is eloquent eh ! Well done Ruchi 🙂
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Thanks Kokila for all these lovely words & encouragement always 🙂
Good Wishes. Xoxo
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